The issue I see is that sediment may build in the pipes over time and not have an escape if the openings get clogged. I am not understanding where your cleanout will be? Ideally it would be at the far end of the water inflow in such a way that open the clean out flushes any gunk out of the system. From your pics, each pipe would need a clean out at the end or they may fill up over time. That would be 9 clean out/flush openings.
I know Addy does not have clean outs and has had no issues! So not having a clean out on each pipe may not be an issue at all.
My bog is fed through a skimmer with a filter pad that catches much large pieces. But when I open my bog clean outs I still get a lot of particles, elm seeds, pieces of plants that flow out.
Your design could be simplified by running 3 long pipes with a clean out each the long way instead of 9 shorter pipes with no clean outs.
I realize you may be committed to your design this far in. But in my experience the clean outs really help flush the lines and I do not see them in your system, I see many deadend pipes that may fill up over time.
PVC pipe is cheap and you are now an expert at cuttings and fittings etc. I might redo it with 3 long pipes with a clean out on each end before you cover it all with gravel.
It looks like you will have a wonderful bog even if you leave it as is! And if the slits are big enough perhaps no cleanouts are needed.